I'm a finalist in
Query Critique Contest
I'm very excited, though I realize after reading all the other revised queries that I have very little hope in winning, but like they say: It's great just to be nominated!
I would like this opportunity to thank everyone
who helped whip my query into better shape, most especially
You, Ms. Weeks, are a godsend, not to mention a freakin' anomaly.
Who can whip out queries like that, I ask you?
Thank you from the bottom of my heart!